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Wednesday 6 November 2013

Copy of Prompt 5














“ Come on David are seriously going to suck my hair with a dad’s  hair machine of whatever it’s called,” exclaimed Susan. “ Ah…. yeah, if you don’t move you won’t feel a thing.” “Please don’t do it, it going to feel weird and and scary as well.’

Later on as soon as David and Susan’s mum had come back from work, David ran to put away the hair Machine and Susan did her hair like it was before. Their mum asked them “Now what did my little children during the day when their mother was out and about? “ Mum were not little children anymore, you know I’m only 19 years old, and brother is 21, said Susan reminding her mum. “Or right then your not my little children anymore, you’re my big 19 year old daughter and you’re my 21 year old son”,said mum.

When is was 10 o’clock and mum was at a dinner. Susan asked David “should we play with dads Machine”, David answered “ Yes lets go see if the Machine is Dads shed. Susan put her shoes on and David and made their way to the front door.

So after a while Susan and David could hear a noise on their way to the shed. The noise sounded like someone was breathing out loud. Susan came up with an idea she whispered it into David’s ear and tried it but it never worked. So Susan and David ran into the house like scaredy cats and when the had entered the house they locked the doors and went to bed thinking they were going to have bad dreams. But the person was still outside the window staring and Susan with his eyes glowing red like a Dragon.

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